My Everything!

..that's all he wrote..

(..life spent, all worth..)

I want to thank you,
For living inside of me;
I want to thank you,
For leading me to see;
I'm alive to thank you,
For all you've made me be,
I dream to thank you,
For letting me be free.
I sing to thank you,
For being next to me,
I cry to tell you,
For gazing in my soul,
I want to show you,
For never letting go.
I'm here to show you,
You're air that I do breathe,
I'm born to know you,
To love you and to cease,
Just know: I love you,
You're Ecstasy to me,
Aroma of all life:
I'm waiting on my knee!

(..s.c..)

Author's Note

It is, what it is!

Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Fierce flow of emotions here! Really loving, open and caring .. this was a huge tribute to another of very, very high appeal. There's so many great lines in such a short, simple writing that represent so much .. I sure hope that whomever it's written for sees and feels the depth of such quality.. words to move mountains!

[LoveAndDreams]

Wow!
This is great, it's emotional and, truthful I guess. I don't know how to explain but it's great!

[Gary McDonald]

What an amazing poem, such powerful, true love felt throughout. You're ability to express your emotion like this is remarkable.

[Katie]

You can tell this is such a heartfelt piece. It is beautiful and romantic. I loved it.

[Buddhistboy73]

i loved this poem. I found it very uplifting, positive and slightly 'religious' in a way too. It evoked images of a 'supreme force or being' in me. The verses flowed perfectly and i felt it inside...great work!

[Theresa]

A beautiful and heartfelt piece. You really are a true romantic and every poem you write is true to who you are. Never stop expressing yourself.

[Taunt-gently]

Its so hard to read this and not think its all been pinned on someone already, but I do understand that fierceness of fire that can seemingly spark up out of nowhere and send the soul into a frenzy of sorts of search and rescue. This is a read that appears almost as if lives really depend on a little bit of discovery.
Intense is the best way to sum up a lot of your work, convincing would be the other.

pen on sir

[Coyote Poetry]

It is beautiful. Sometime we must tell the ones we love they are our life. A excellent poem. Description was very good.
Coyote

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and it is...amazing :D

[deeps]

This is very well written such a wonderful write full of emotion.

[Taylor H.]

beautfiul and full of emotions. wonderful