Finally

(Please read freely; connect the leaning passion onto the next supporting pickup; read with your soul; feel with your heart. Connect the dots...and find life)

There   you   are; in   disguise
Drawing me  in by your eyes
In full   moon, you  are  there
Just  the  one beach we share
And   in  cold   Winter  nights
Hopelessly,  lifting to heights
Wishing,   praying,   in  faith
Mirror  reflections  are  made

One   to   One,   take   a    gaze
Now   surrender  ablaze,   see
Believe and  do  melt,  listen:
In  heartfelt': I am  you,  you
Are, I ... mirrored,  one,   two
It's true; See me in  you,  just
Be,
I am swimming to you,  now
Please   swim  back  to   me...

Author's Note

As the last days are falling upon us; staring at the big, Full moon; on the piece of life I seek answers and wish wishes, that you are staring back to me, reciting to me your everlasting magical spell, manifesting heaven itself into me; receiving my heart, as I hand it to you over the open waters, enlightened by the meaning of life! Waiting for you!

Reviews

[Chirinos20]

A great piece you got here. It is a very powerful and emotional one. Thanks for sharing and keep on sending read requests!

Chirinos20

[Cassandra D.]

I loved it.
It was so well written and beautiful :)

[Taylor H.]

I agree with Katie. This was a great poem and thank you for sharing it with us. :)

[Katie]

This a very intense piece. Romantic does not even describe this lovely write. Great job!

[Brokensoul]

How could you be so chronically romantic?
I am swimming to you, now
Please swim back to me...
it's soooooooooo amazing!

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

Love's deep reverie is never more beautifully reflected than in the eyes of another who feels the same. I pray that she will meet you on the shores of your heart.

Linda Marie

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. Gentle and loving words. So many lines stood out. Ending was very good.
Coyote.

[Luna]

This is very interesting, very sweet. Great work.