Bed for two.

Once so full,
  the love,
  the joy.

Now, each night,
  only one.

Started so warm and crowded.

Now,
  so empty and cold.

Still, I feel you.

Go to bed dear.
  You need your sleep.

Reviews

[asdarkeyesclose]

'Still, I feel you.'

may be we only truly appreciate what we have once we lose it, a special loved one can never be replaced. i loved the sharp contrast here. fantastic.

[Jon Roggie]

Thank you! Still trying to figure out a way to express myself with a minimal amount of words.

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~ very poignant, very vivid... and enchanting poetry... beautifully written...

[Jon Roggie]

Thanks! I never know how my writing is taken. Rarely go back and edit. Feels better if I just write as I would talk to someone.

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~ your writing is extremely powerful... albeit a bit quiet...for me that is...because i wish sometimes that there were more words... ~ you're very welcome...

[Jon Roggie]

Thank you as always. Still hesitant. I just want my words to be honest. Leads to using as few words as possible. I just want to express pure emotion. I know. Sappy.

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~ "sappy" ? ... no way... pure emotion is awesome... it's profound and perceptive... and true poetry... to read "sappy", you have to allocate 48 hours to read the stuff that's posted on this site... provided you don't have a weak heart... i do, so i run away from those posts... they could take my life... :P

[Jon Roggie]

Thank you serah.

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~ you're very welcome, monsieur jon... and thank you for being such a brilliant and true poet... you always inject energy in my universe of words...