I keep trying

i thought it would be easy.

Subtle hope.

unnoticed hand.

    now i can't stop.
       every loss takes a toll.

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~ mister ed hart had once told me that "the name of the lesson is loss but it's a gain"... i think it takes a lot of effort to convert pain into art... as you've done right here on this page... ~ this piece is beautifully written...

[Jon Roggie]

I try to think you can be pissed at life. You can also be pissed at life, try to do something about it. Prefer the later. Thanks as always.

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~ you're very welcome... as always... :)