Dogpaddling in the sea of creativity

Best I can do.

Once in awhile,
  find somewhere to rest.

Still,
  dive back into the water.

Not the best swimmer.

But I try.

Reviews

[paul]

brilliant stuff.

[Jon Roggie]

Glad you liked it! Brilliant? Not sure, but I think it is honest. Thanks!

[asdarkeyesclose]

'Still,
dive back into the water.'

very astute, that natural creativity that us poets can not live without, that need to write and express, even though the results are not always brilliant. a new favorite! fantastic.

[Jon Roggie]

Thanks! Sometimes just putting together some words helps.

[.]

~ you are unique... the best in brevity... :)

[Jon Roggie]

Thanks! I keep trying to write longer pieces, but I always reach a point where my instincts says stop!

[.]

~ well... your instincts CANNOT be wrong... ~ we need all kinds of poetry in the universe of words... :)