Candle burning at both ends

Does it help?
   Glimpse of a desert night?
     Life amongst the sand?

Do you feel?
  Waves crashing on the shore?
     Changing and fluid?

Does it remind?
  Breeze across your face?
    Delicate touch like a memory?

Does it warm you?
  Flame of feeling?
    Light and healing?

I rush to ask,
  time is dear.

Try to ask,
  while the light is clear.

Reviews

[Renée]

reads like...... tempting coos whispering in the ear....

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:: wow... exquisite imagery... and a gorgeous invitation to experience all those sensations... beautiful work, monsieur jon... i loved the tone of narration too... could almost hear your voice...