Do you recognize me?

A shock to see,
  moonlight passing through adds to the feeling.

Features so close,
  almost a mirror.

Bit of puzzlement shared by both.

Locking stares,
  chill in the air.

I've seen the old pictures,
  heard the stories,
    so I can take a guess who you were.

Days long gone by.

Still,
  with a question in your eye,
      as you slowly vanish.

I can only wonder.

Do you recognize me?

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i've had a visitor...once.

a young girl, wearing a school uniform...she stood by my bed then backed down the hallway very slowly...all took around 30 seconds..she seemed so troubled...wish i could have asked her what was wrong.

a bit of a chill reading this.

[Jon Roggie]

Closest time for me had to have been in Berlin. One room, so many had went through. A terrible echo.

[Samuel Dickens]

As you've shown here, dreams can be an awesome source for creative writing. Do you think you were visited?

[Jon Roggie]

Remembered a story I stumbled across about a relative, name of Black Jack Ketchum. Classic ghost story. Fun part is growing up, just about every town we moved to while I was growing up, he had been there. Now, I can't seem to locate the story!

[Jon Roggie]

Just found it. Still sends chills down my spine, and was an obvious influence. Look under New Mexico Ghosts. Black Jack Ketchum.

[Samuel Dickens]

I'll do that. Thanks.

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:: an encounter with a spooky stranger ? ... very eerie writing... high impact work... :P

[Jon Roggie]

Had a reminder of a ghost story of my grandmother's older cousin. Great part is it was not a family story (:

[.]

:: oh... very interesting... :)

[Renée]

o0o0oooo ...Nicely done..i bet it could be like that...

[Jon Roggie]

Told you I have been some interesting dreams (;

[Renée]

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