Work in progess

May I have your attention?

From comments I've seen,
  I doubt you will listen.

Let them write.
They don't need your sarcastic words.

Let them find their way.

Or is that your only way to gain attention?

Reviews

[Renée]

Disgustingly, yes.. it is about bringing attention to themselves or just to cause mayhem for their pleasure.. Good news ... we can block, delete and be thankful they are not our next door neighbors

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:: very well said, my wise fairy...

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:: i completely agree with you... the freedom of expression is just not respect enough...

[Jon Roggie]

Thank you, flutterby. Was getting a bit cranky!

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:: not at all... feel free to say anything... your page, your poem, your words... that's the rule... :)

[Ranger Nadaly]

I like this piece. I think the subject is clever, and can grasp attention. Although this doesn't seem to be the right piece to want to critique, you might want to reread. A word seems to be misspelled.

[Jon Roggie]

Thank you. Spotted the word you mentioned. I always put out the original write!

[Ranger Nadaly]

No problem. I think its neat that you put the original piece out