A dance

Our words move around each other.
  Touching for a moment.

Graceful attempt.

Tireless effort,
   seeking beauty.

We continue,
  watching,
    and we dance.

Reviews

[Renée]

This is lovely, and yes, graceful in its flow.. makes me wish for time to write !

[Jon Roggie]

Thank you, Pixie. We can only grab the chance when time permits!

[Renée]

Amen to that Mr T (:

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-- oh, what a magical piece of poetry, monsieur jon...

[Jon Roggie]

Thank you. An attempt at beauty ....

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-- my privilege, mr. turtle... :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

we watch life from the sidelines, watching others dance to the music, to the poetry of life...and sooner or later our pens get up and join the dance---the line dance....

[Jon Roggie]

We always dance. Thank you, sir.