Motives

A Poem by Jon Roggie

I still say I ramble.

I talk about my dog.

She adopted me.

I have to pick her up when she chooses to sleep in my bed.

What does this do with the first sentence?

It adds background.

Now,

you know a little slice of my life.

It may be a ramble,

but the words show a part of yourself.

What you show can be calculated.

Yes,

a bit of the cold is showing through.

Innocent daydreams may have purpose.

In the end,

all goes back to the motive.

© 2016 Jon Roggie

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Lyn Anderson

Quite the interesting little ramble. Spoiled dog, indulgent owner. She also may be old, and is likely small. What is your motive for picking up the dog? If I were to equate it to me picking up the cat, I would have to say, to keep out the cold ...

Posted 9 Years Ago

9 Years Ago

As far as the dog, she is probably about 13. She comes back to my room when the storms start,
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Coyote Poetry

I agree my friend Jon.
"Yes,
a bit of the cold is showing through.
Innocent daydreams may have purpose.
In the end,
all goes back to the motive."
Life lead us to the place we need to be. Things do fall into place. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago

9 Years Ago

I will admit, everything I post is the first draft. Still, there is some kind of reason behind them.. read more

9 Years Ago

Good writing is free-throw. Release the thoughts to paper and we hope for a good ending.

jacob erin-cilberto

and the motive is love...between a pet and a human...it is unconditional, at least on the animal's part...even if humans aren't good at being unconditional...

we should love other humans as we do pets...but then, some really abuse animals as well.

j.