Thoughts

I think as i write,

a request i have been asked,

I figure it out right now,

sense i hope they make.

 

Scared i am,no one has read my work.

I hope it comes together

and sense it makes.

 

Be truthful in judgements made,

This is what i love to do.

The thoughts that run through my mind,

an impression i hope to make.

 

Juelz.

Reviews

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you write beautifully
these words are extremely expressive

[Joe]

This is a good poem. Your word choice and rhythm really make it flow very well. Great job! Keep it up!