HER NAME WAS LUNA

A Poem by Julie Grenness

For a contest, unrequited love.

Her name was Luna,

Nearly met when they were younger,

They met on the 12th of never,

They grew old apart, whatever,

Ships in the night of stars,

Ever loving from afar,

She met him on the 12th of never,

Luna kept him young forever.

© 2015 Julie Grenness

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Ovi-Odiete

Very Beautiful and Great . . .

Posted 10 Years Ago

Maxi Belamie

So many emotions in so few words... I love it.

Posted 10 Years Ago

Green-eyedFox

This is beautiful. You can feel the pain of loving someone that doesn't even know you exist, and who could never love you in return. Beautifully written and expressive. Well done, Ms. Julie.

Posted 10 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Julie Grenness

Bayswater, Melbourne., Victoria., Australia

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Greetings, my name is Julie. I live in Victoria, Australia. I am a 61 yo widow, a mostly retired teacher and tutor. Currently, I tutor two ESL students in English, as well as Maths and Science. Scribb.. more..