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A Poem by Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)
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about stars listen to Chopin Nocturne op 9 No. 2. if possible on u tube.

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Oh little star
oh one so bright
that shines my night
oh little star
so very  large afar
why cant i travel to sit on you
and gaze down to my earth below
why must i stay on this earth
like so?
id rather be with you up high 
so up close to you
Of this i yearn to go
oh little star
shine your beams of  light down on me
so that i can travel up through thee
oh joyous star
dont be so far away
i stare and gaze at you all night
at least you have the fairies bright
to guide you through each passing night
oh lilttle star
 my guiding light

© 2017 Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)


Author's Note

Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)
written quickly and rather silly i know

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Actually you are the writing star

Posted 8 Years Ago


Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

8 Years Ago

No lol but thanks for kind thoughts
Thanks mark for some reason I couldn't reply direct so thanks for the review

Posted 8 Years Ago


Mark Mendoza

8 Years Ago

No problem. Chopin is great btw . some of the first music i learned to play
Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

8 Years Ago

Great yes sometimes I like classical depends on mood always uplifts
Ive had this feeling time and time again

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

8 Years Ago

May I ask why you replied to someone on my page sorry I could t reply once you did ?
Prashant Bajpai

8 Years Ago

sorry for that sir but it was some missunderstanding as i got the notification and i thought it is f.. read more
Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

8 Years Ago

No problem that's ok
no it is quite good the words used are easy to under stand by the readers

Posted 8 Years Ago


Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

8 Years Ago

Thanks so much !

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Added on June 18, 2017
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Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)
Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

Sydney , Australia



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Amateur old poet well not that old but not a young 20 anymore I live to write I write at least five poems ditties every weekend and a few during week I write quickly it just flows and bu.. more..