Every road leads here

A bit morbid sorry the rich are very rich the poor too poor

Do you think
You standing there
That you will escape
The icy stair
That leads to
All our speckled fate
At heavens and hells
Intersection gate

Do u think with clothes so fair
That you will stay alive forever
As you sit and blankly stare
Into the void of hearts so empty there

I see the poor the ragged child
With heart so silently lit
If only you could give a damn one single bit
And take the time to worry
Or just give a bit

Your heart so cold
So empty but so rich in golden
Fare
Just give a damn to that child
Who sits so silent
There
In your invisible world
That no one cares

Reviews

[Avia]

I think the world is to deep in this mentality, but it's nice to see people think about others. It gives hope that this world is not completely doomed. The poem is nice.

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Thanks for your kind review

[writ rajat]

Very nice to read the social message nice keep going

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Thanks for your review

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Any review most welcome thanks

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Not sure I understand myself but I wrote it quickly about the poor and the very selfish rich