Adoration

Writing as I go

''Twas in the morning
She bewitched him the most
As if her rising yawn
In breaking dawn
With white moon
Over misty ocean
In breaking sunrise
Took him to another place
Another realm
A mystical magic
Spell
She lay there
Her covers half had shed
And early yellow sun and
Misty moon
Rays on her head
He knew he would love her
So
till he breathed his last
Breath
so
He quietly covered her bare
Skin
And made their coffee for another
Heaven sent day
Just she and him
The moon the sun
The stars the gulls
The rising tide
and she and him

Reviews

[Norah]

I love it! especially the ending, a really great story overall

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Norah thanks very much appreciated

[jacob erin-cilberto]

very romantic write....flows like the sunlight through the blinds the morning after....the contentment felt when waking up...

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Thanks Jacob that means a lot to me

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Thanks Jacob that means a lot to me

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

What do u suggest please

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Thanks
Thanks
Thanks I will

[writ rajat]

After editing it look better nice one to see