Black

Black

A Poem by Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

Little black dress
Big black bear
Black and white minstrel
Black silk stockings
Black large umberella
Black shiny English taxi
Black shiny pearls
Black leather chair
Black men's suit
Black widow spider
Black mood
White moon
Gold cross
..............
Red warm heart

© 2017 Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)


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I really liked this. The end line was worth it. Well done

Posted 8 Years Ago


I really love how you've put reason and feeling behind the colour Black.. a refreshing read :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

8 Years Ago

Thanks
Thanks for stopping by
Thanks Jacob and. Carol for kindest reviews

Posted 8 Years Ago


Goodness! You've explained why "black" will always be classy and sassy. All that black to cover red warm hearts--this paints a spontaneous picture in my head and I love your color scheme.

Posted 8 Years Ago


i like how the colors explode at the end....from the darkness comes light and color...and resiliency to bounce back from the shadows.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

8 Years Ago

Thanks Jacob for your kind review

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Added on July 25, 2017
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Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)
Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

Sydney , Australia



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Amateur old poet well not that old but not a young 20 anymore I live to write I write at least five poems ditties every weekend and a few during week I write quickly it just flows and bu.. more..