alien

silly nonsense

hey you out there
do you really exist
i thought i saw you
the other night
dancing around my
lines of underwear
under the moon so bright
in that midnight sky
you came quickly by
your starship blue
it glowed like red hot glue
my dog it barked
at what i knew not
was it really you
you mysterious green
clothed alien you?

just if you do come by again
i like to get up not before half past ten
its my beauty sleep i need
i suppose you dont feel the same
with your glowing purple skin
and your pink hair
and green outfit there
i suppose you like to eat what you want
and never worry about diets and such
hey i think i saw you again
rummaging in my line of underwear
under that moon so bright
your starship has visited my yard again
tonight

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

ThAnkyou to all who re iewed

[Great Aunt Astri]

Yes, I think they are everywhere, probably getting ready to take over our underwear. I'd offer them a cup of tea next time, and gently suggest they get their bras and panties at a shop!

[emmajoy]

Seems your alien has an underwear fetish!!! This poem has such a smile running through it.. tis fun, tis finely put,. tis a tale with a future. Could have at least two more parts,don't you think? Your alien could be a'visiting, or you have a most colour imagination.. or.. who knows -it's wishful thinking, julie!!

So like the gentle rolls of your words, the humour, the slight wonder of what you've discovered in your thoughts.. imagination. Perhaps.

[Paul Bell]

There must be some sort of life out there.
Though i must admit, every weekend i see all sorts of alien life.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

by far nonsense
sometimes nonsense is fun