we

what we do

We evolve

We break

We tear

We repair

We strive

We watch

We wait

We do

We don’t

We cant

We will

We evolve

We change

We evolve

We are

Reviews

[Carol Cashes]

Life from beginning to end. But of course, you said it waaaay better. I really enjoy your work, it's not so esoteric as to be out of my league (*smirk*) but there is no mistaking the same talent the poets who adhere to strict forms (some I've never heard of) possess. You know, I used to think I was a real smarty pants until I joined this site and while my ego is not so fragile that it can't take a hit or two, I have certainly been made aware of just how literary illiterate I am.

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Magnificently said- so much in so few words! You covered every nuance of 'we-ness'. Great use of language and repetition. Great flow, cadence, form. Home-run Julie!!:)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right dear Julie. Life is change and learning to accept. I liked the flow of thoughts leading to the logical ending. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

I know I'm not up to the same class as all on here.

[Carol Cashes]

Honey, you're in the top ten. That counts on Billboard (music) and the The New York Times Bestsellers. Straighten that tiara and stride purposely away.

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

What top ten lol

[Carol Cashes]

Well, at the very least my top ten, but I'm sure you rate the same for some others who respect and acknowledge your talent. I've seen your reviews...

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Aw gee blushing
I write to stay sane lol doesn't always work