woodwork party

woodwork party

A Poem by Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)
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Writing as I go it's early morn

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The grubs came out that day
The weavels came to play
The bark Beatles had a feast
Hip hip hooray
The spiders all came out
To crawl on wet rained on wood
Like we knew they really would
The splinters looked like
Tiny shiny soldier men
The grubs came out that day
Out of the woody old decay
On that day
The grubs came out of the
Wet shiny woodwork
That day
That merry month
We all know
As yes you heard right May

© 2017 Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)


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I write this long before COVID and vaccines 💉 and lockdowns but I believe it’s a metaphor for the govts now worldwide

Posted 3 Years Ago


I love this jolly little poem! It is one of your best ones in my opinion! I really really loved the imagery and the playfulness of your tone... good writing! Well done...

Posted 8 Years Ago


Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

8 Years Ago

Thanks so much that means a lot to me
Hi Annette just saying hi are u ok haven't seen u much

Posted 8 Years Ago


Tra La! Love the jocularity, rhyme and musicality of this delightful poem...i can see all the little critters and skitters as they parade along. Great imagery & very original. Love it Julie!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

8 Years Ago

Thanks Annette for reviewing
Any reviews or ideas welcome

Posted 8 Years Ago


I wrote this about anything and everything that is lies hypocrisy and false you can use it in your own mind as you please with whatever stance you may take from it

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on October 11, 2017
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Author

Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)
Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

Sydney , Australia



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Amateur old poet well not that old but not a young 20 anymore I live to write I write at least five poems ditties every weekend and a few during week I write quickly it just flows and bu.. more..