iris

iris

A Poem by Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

You are the iris of my eye
the apple may have gone
the pears and strawberries
and chocolate and swansongs
you are the iris of my eye
oh beautiful iris
I know you are there
to see me safe beyond 
my own closed eyes

you are the transparent cornea
of my eye
all else is wild and blue
so true to you
you are the translucent cornea 
of mine eye
you are the steadfast keeper the cornea
of mine  own blue eyes

you are the lashes that surround my eyes
your long swift lashes that blink out daily sun rays
you are the lashes of my eyes
so soft and feathery and light 
you are the sunshades for mine eyes
in driving light and dizzy night lights
you are the lashes of mine eyes
you are the whites in my eyes
the pure white with blood veins beyond
sometimes clear after a long summers slumber
sometimes red after a night of dreadful insomnia
you are the whites of mine own eyes

I love the best the iris of mine own eyes
when your  eyes meet mine
I see your iris deep and so divine
you are the iris of mine own eyes
in moods you widen in anger you shrink
I can tell who you are when my iris meets
thine own iris in your own minds eye

I love the best my iris deep in my eyes
I love to see your iris too
when thine eyes meet mine
where east meets west
where south meets north
the iris clicks
the lashes whish
the whites are bright
you are the iris of my night
You are the pupil of mine own eyes My pupil deep and black Your iris will never hold back My pupil my iris my cornea my white My lashes gently feather in slumber All that summer night

© 2017 Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)


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moons fairest daughter (dr) I have changed the cornea verses. tell me if better?

Posted 8 Years Ago


As a doctor, i would say that the cornea is transparent...other than the poem is quite innovative and beautiful! ❤

Posted 8 Years Ago


Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

8 Years Ago

Yes I know I'll change word what can I say instead of cornea
Moonie

8 Years Ago

The cornea must be transparent...cannot be translucent. I am so sorry i am bringing science into thi.. read more
windows of your soul,,beautiful

Posted 8 Years Ago


Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

8 Years Ago

thanks so much for stopping by and reading
have a great day
 wordman

8 Years Ago

my pleasure
So beautiful and wonderful use of words. The eyes. Window to all things if we pay attention. I liked how you made the reader feel and understand your words. Thank you Julie for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

8 Years Ago

I forgot the pupil lol yes this is in awe of our own eyes
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

They are. A woman with kindness and gentleness in her eyes. Can calm down a wild beast. You are welc.. read more
Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

8 Years Ago

Thanks coyote
Means a lot

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Added on October 20, 2017
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Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)
Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

Sydney , Australia



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Amateur old poet well not that old but not a young 20 anymore I live to write I write at least five poems ditties every weekend and a few during week I write quickly it just flows and bu.. more..