Infinite

What happens when infinite
Becomes final finally
That infinite infinity
We eternally lose
It’s gone forever
This world
This universe
To nothing
The memory infinitely
Eternally gone
There’s no one to recall them
Just the dust of a heart
Once broken
Once loved
Lying there
Twisting turning
Imagining it’s still beating
amongst the
Eternal stars
Infinite infinity

Reviews

[Ghost]

This touches so many ideals... I see it most as losing the mind to Alzheimer's and Dementia And I have witnessed first hand just what the disease can do... Thanks for sharing this poem

[Pete]

the concept of infinity is quite mind-boggling. you've done a great job of capturing it here. could apply these thoughts many things. was thinking about the auto brand (infinity). great thoughts and food-for-thought. enjoyable ...

[Robin Saxon]

When I read this I imagined the end of a relationship, where one partner wants no further contact with the other. 'What happens when infinite becomes final finally'

And then I scrolled down.

Good piece, gets the grey matter doing what it should do.

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Thanks for your kind review you can interpret any of my stuff any way you desire that’s the beauty of having individual minds

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

If the world was no more
If it just stopped
These are my questions I ask

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Got to work early today wrote quickly in haste te