Reality

Thud
Crash bang
Went my ego
What little I had
Has gone
Under cement
Buried
Never to surface
On my path of life again
I’m grounded
Now
Walking
Crunch
On these pebbles
Kicking as I go
My path
To
Happinesses
My own yellow brick road

Author's Note

Written freehand in less than three minutes

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Thanks for kindest reviews
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[Coyote Poetry]

I understand this poem. I fell down often and I gathered my senses and go forward. I liked the personal Yellow brick road. Thank you Julie for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Great words- yes pride comes before a fall- good to knowcwe live and learn we grow we move onwards and upwards choosingblife or death...🌹