Shadow talk

A Poem by Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

Written quick after my coffee

My shadow
Saw your shadow
First

No you said
I was here first
This is my footpath

Let’s sit
We decided
Work this out

We sat on bench
Seat
Our shadows trickled

Grey into bluey green

As one
Into the
Lake in front of us

© 2022 Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

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jacob erin-cilberto

and the shadows saw their reflection in the water...
Love will do that.

Posted 3 Years Ago

3 Years Ago

Thanks I appreciate that

CLR9

This poem is great and really good. What makes this poem great is that it is really good. Great poem here. good job!

Posted 3 Years Ago

3 Years Ago

Aww thanks 🙏

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Added on August 15, 2022
Last Updated on August 15, 2022

Author

Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

Sydney , Australia

About

Amateur old poet well not that old but not a young 20 anymore I live to write I write at least five poems ditties every weekend and a few during week I write quickly it just flows and bu.. more..