Daybreak

Written quickly on waking

Sun ray in her eyes
Beams deep
to her
Innermost core

Her being
Connected
Magically
Instantly

With planets stars moon
Sun clouds wind rain hail fire
Lightning thunder

Her creator
Her God

Blinking her tears out
Reinforcing
Her vision

Of life
In all it’s beauty
Danger wonder
Sadness happiness

The sunrise was pleased
That it pleasured her so

With its rays
Of gold

Reviews

[Dave Brown]

sounds like the only way to wake up
we were woken/waked/awakinized by a telephone scam artist (don't know how those turds can live with themselves) to see snow on the ground and a hundred hungry birds waiting for breakfast

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Oh are you in usa
Yes I don’t answer numbers I don’t know now
Thanks for your review
What sort of birds curious

[Dave Brown]

we are in British Columbia, Van Island
The birds are mostly blackcap, some chickadee, crows, ravens, towhee, woodpeckers, owls and varied thrush
Robins, swallows and others will arrive when it stops freezing

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Ok well only another month of summer here and winter there
Soon you will be feeling hot and sweaty working in your non snow yard

[Dave Brown]

Ya man

[Gee]

Oh what I would give to wake to the warmth of a rising sun as at present we are getting battered by wind and rain this to be replaced with forecasted snow in the near future:(
A well.penned piece Julie.
Hope you are well

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Hi yes I heard on news re weather
Take care
I’m well enough hope you are too
read moreHi yes I heard on news re weather
Take care
I’m well enough hope you are too
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[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Thanks for reading and review

[Tania Mo]

I wake up to a happy golden day. Felt so good.

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Thanks so much / take care

[DIVYA]

The sunlight did such wonders for her soul! She beheld the beauty of her own self and that of all creation in a single frame. A poem so beautiful to read.

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Thanks I really appreciate that
Hope you well

[Betty Hermelee]

So lovely to be well connected so warmly to the sun, the planets, stars.... and lightning, thunder, rain; seems like all the elements fall deep into her core; to propel a spirit of relief, joy and a fresh look at life itself..the sun (brought to life) took pleasure in her delight
Vivid images.well penned
Best, B

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Thanks so much happy new year to you

[willweb]

To be greeted by a sunrise is the best way to start the day. This was beautiful, I could feel the warmth of those golden beams as they flowed through the window illuminating your eyes as they opened for the first time that day.

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Thanks very much
Happy new year 🥳