Describing a nightmare

I felt paralyzed towards my whole body. It was like a lightning bolt, waiting to put me down at my weakest minute. I could see his sharp, icy eyes piercing through me every time I looked directly at him. It hurt. It felt like I was a pig on a medieval roasting spit. My whole body was sweating. I could hear them converse to each other. There were perhaps five of them or maybe more. Who knows? I couldn’t make out what they were saying. It sounded too foreign for my ears and my brain to pick up and recognize the language. I knew I had to get out of this sticky situation. I had too. Too much thinking of planning to flee was hurting my brain. I had to continue thinking. I could hear their conversation getting louder which meant that they coming closer than I actually thought. Their naive laughs rang in my head like a school bell, encouraging me to sort this situation out. Initially, I hesitated the fury inside me. Too strong to purely ignore. 
I look up; I can see the sky with floating blood drop clouds drifting by. I can smell burnt bodies of the unfortunate victims that got caught before me by the unknown figures. I can almost hear spirits of the dead bodies calling me to set them free. The atmosphere felt so tense and so dramatic, I couldn’t bear this feeling anymore. I was praying for freedom, I just wanted God to answer my call, I wanted him to realize how important this was. That’s all I remember,  but its strange how just a nightmare could ever seem so real…..

Reviews

[Miyank]

I can imagine a cult who terrorizes cities and worship devil. They burn their victims and asks for immortality as a reward. I can see tension and fear. But the contest asked for Mystery-Thriller with suspects, victims and investigation to make people guess who is the real culprit? "ill make sure you remember me" have the same problem though I like them very much.

[Philophobia420]

Describe the setting more normally I can assume whats happening but I am sort of lost over all your an amazing writer just read it from someone else's point of view if that made sense

[Sam]

This is really good. The description you put into it was really great.

Also, in the last sentence I think its should be it's instead.

[C. Rose]

"I had too" should be "I had to"

I can feel the tension building.

Even though this is a dream like excerpt, be sure to balance thoughts and visuals.