THE NIGHT SKY

THE NIGHT SKY

 

As I glanced at a spectacular night sky, what I saw enamored me completely. So gorgeous it was that I couldn’t take my eyes off it. I saw many stars that took me down a memory lane.

The stars started forming illusions in my mind. As I gazed at the stars, it appeared as if someone had actually placed diamonds in the sky. Then I shifted my gaze to the moon. What I always thought was dull had turned so majestic, so plain it was and yet so mesmerizing. Silver and shinning; with certain grey spots. The shine was a sight to behold. I was captivated staring at those patches. I could make out the outline of devil knitting, then a girl looking down at the earth. It seemed like she was waving her hands joyfully.  

The beautiful moon  and the twinkling stars around captured my attention. The sky looked so happy above but down below, I stood sad. I don’t remember when the sad and rejected me was modified magically, but I do recall how my lips curved into a smile, and that was given to me by the magical look of the night sky.

Reviews

[Saddam]

The beautiful moon and the twinkling stars
around captured my attention. The sky
looked so happy above.

Very beautiful creation dear. Actually things are not the same as it looks like but they have many mystory in stomach. I remind my nights in chilly december, cold, freeze, and having no emotions.

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked and enjoyed your description of the night sky. I like the positive feel of the night and good memories born. Thank you for sharing the excellent short story.
Coyote

[Brian M. Peeples]

I loved this. Keep up the amazing work!

[KurKota]

I realize that I already had submitted a brief review of this... but I was re-reading some of you works, and as I read this it comes to mind how it always overwhelms me when I look at the moon to think of it being the exact same object that not only are millions of people looking at on this same night all over the world, but how many people have looked at that exact same surface for thousands of years and eons. It is an almost overwhelming thougtht, and you do an excellent job here personalizing such a massive phenomenon to make it seem touchable !! Great word pictures.

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Hehe Now this is Nice!! I love the way you wrote and captivating title I must admit!
A beautiful piece! Love the way you have captured the night sky and created such a beautiful piece well done :) I enjoyed it!

[KurKota]

A beautiful description, showing the bright imagination of your wonderful mind !!! Like it....