The Bearded One

About a King and how he really is!( also the band he is in)

 

 

 

The Bearded One

 

The bearded King,

ruler of the lonely

being gruff at times

saying “ I'm the man!”

 

King Sef, he is

The bearded one

this one is strong

comparing to none

 

There's more to him

than you can see

taking up his guitar

playing wild and free

 

He rocks real hard

with all the band

the love they show

is all so grand

 

To tame this man

you may need a dish

peanut butter & chocolate

is what he'd wish

 

Deep down inside

he's real sweet & fine

you just have to stop

and take some time

 

He's been dealt his share

of pain and strife

but that doesn't stop him

to better his life!

 

 

 

He share's his love

with a family, a band

with Jeff at the wheel

they all make a stand

 

Their music appeals

to one and all

once you go YFE

there's nothing else- at all!

 

 

To my friend King Sef

this poems for you

with love to send

and oh yeah, hugs too! 

Reviews

[Journey]

This is a nice dedication to your friend. I like the rhyming scheme and the fun feel that this piece carries.

[Michael X]

wow, i love the dedicational aspect of this poem, it possesses a real sense of friendship and encourgaement with a fun and light hearted flow. you have
an excellent way with rhymes. keep up the great work.

[Sean M. Addams]

i liked this alot .. feels like a story to me but a fun and well told one..I enjoyed this alot nice job!!!