ataraxia

her soul wonders

the loss of her ardent desire.

Imagining herself free from anguish,

like a bird, soaring in a clear blue sky.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

intensely brief and powerful....Less is more.
I want to be soaring like this bird.
j.

[Juse]

thank you very much, sir!

[willweb]

Short, sweet and wonderfully expressed. You have such a light touch with the pen. Your words float softly across the page.

[Juse]

That was really sweet to say... this is actually my first poem. I can't thank you enough, Sir.

[Relic]

Well said. People find many ways to escape. Welcome to the site, Joy.

[Juse]

Thanks Relic!