In my arms

after a fight between my parents, i watched my sister cry herself to sleep

Little brown eyes

Watching, Praying

Mommy and daddy are full of lies

Crying, Praying

 

Quiet cooing in her ear

Sniffleing, Praying

A pair of arms come near

Comforting, Praying

 

The music plays while

I cry to sleep

My love cries in my arms

Do, Re, Mi

So much I wish to do

Like whisk my Cinderella away

My love cries in my arms

Fa, So, La

All I want to do for

My love who cries in my arms

Ti, Do

Is to forget.

Author's Note

raw please

Reviews

[Erin Hogan]

this is so well... raw. its a gorgous lulliby. i can feel the soft gentle weeping.
All I want to do for

"My love who cries in my arms

Ti, Do

Is to forget."
this is the only piece that i feel doesnt fit as well in the poem., wit all the other lines theres three lines, then the scale and with this one its only two, it feels a little off to me.
other than that its an amzing piece of work!

[Nykkiicia Cion]

very emotional piece.