i'll be there

this is a load of experiences and hopes put together when you're facing what seem to be the darkest days of your life and someone comes along...

I'm not asking you to follow my lead,

it's complicated and i don't know why.

Don't shed a tear for me 'cos i didn't choose this,

I was destined for it.

So light your fire, take your place,

We'll wonder into the dark light a safer place and if you,

Need a friend, I'll be there

Take my hand and give me yours in return.

We'll face the ruins of this world together,

I'll be by your side and you stay by mine.

If you let go, I'll lose my way.

So keep a close watch my dear,

This world will tempt you down when you fall asleep.

Take a deep breath, I can't promise you it'll be easy,

Rise and falls will strengthen this love.

But if you, need a friend, I'll be there.

Take my hand and give me yours in return.

Reviews

[Bexfinch]

I like this reminded me of fireworks...and light the night.......(those were the lyrics right) My fave line was so light your fire take your place :) good job :)

[jwenjwen]

if you're referring to katy perry's 'firework'.. no this was written long before that :) thanks for reading :D

[fiery-san]

I love the friendship in this poem as well as the strong bond it conveyed, it was light and gentle... simple but lovely. Nice job. Keep writing and improving. ^_^

[jwenjwen]

its like wanting the person to stay but you're messed up already and you dont want to mess them up by asking them to stay but they choose to stay so you try to make it the best experience for them will all you have left of yourself :)
thank you for reading and yeah i like to keep it simple. the world's complicated enough haha.

[jwenjwen]

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