lover

not everyone has a good luck charm or there star with them ....

in this world of heartbreaks
let me be your lover
let me love you true!

Reviews

[Jade]

short & to the point, enjoyable

[kenza salmi]

Awsome ! ...Okay, I am ready for your Love hahaha .. I am female , zaineb .Don't worry !! lol....a Very very nice poem...keep on the great work!

[Zaineb nisar]

a sarcastic comment though! anyways thank you

[kenza salmi]

Nooooooooo, Zaineb ! I swear that I am not making fun of you . It's a matter of cultures,Believe me :( my friends and I always say such funny things to one onother and laugh, but when I told you sth like what we used to say you considered it " a sarcastic comment " !! I don't even think to put srcastic comments to people ...I am really sorry; dear ! I do apologize.

[Zaineb nisar]

its okay dear