Cold Spot

a cold spot

in a

bottomless

ocean--

can be felt

more often

than not.

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Swimming in the ocean as much as I have I can testify to the truth of this. Luckily there are warm currents as well. I enjoyed the read. F.

[Onoma]

I happened on a cold spot, while jumping off a boat for a swim, miles out during a fishing trip. It gave all the sensation of being touched by a void. Thanks Fabian.

[Papaya]

Short, but fine brevity.

[Onoma]

There are times when words refuse to give beyond a certain point, this poem was one of them. Thanks Ana~