Why this limited love

The power of love

Why this limited love,

do not move to above,

the limited line,
When I am your and you are mine.

So why this limited love 

why this limited love.

The love must be unlimited,

barriers should not be created.

If you think I am a betrayer,

why not you do some prayers,

you have a lustrous beauty,

why this limited love.

Reviews

[jvava]

A pretty good poem with structure.
I like how you summarized it - "The power of love" - because love does have magnificent power and you captured love's esscence in this poem.
Good job! Keep writing.

[writ rajat]

thanks you for the wondrous comment

[jvava]

You're welcome!