The comedy

I believe this poem make you laugh

It is  not me who is writing,

it is my computer on which I am typing,

let me write let me paste,

give some time to have some taste,

of the dish which is in front of me,

before my momy stop me,

the world is all over round ,

reviews cannot be easily found,

no one here to see my stuff ,

my age is now 60 plus.

The reason behind writing it in blue,

The age I mention is not true,

and blue is rhyming word of true

Author's Note

thanks you for smiling

Reviews

[Justin]

You made me laugh. Great poem.

[Cryingkate]

Thank You also for the giggles :-) I'm already liking you

[PurpleQuartz]

I loved it! Made me smile :D

[writ rajat]

thanks for your loveable smile

[kitty]

heehee how silly :P sorry but after 2 am my brain starts thinking in very simple terms...

[writ rajat]

thanks you so much for your wonderfull comments

[Rachelle]

Ha! Ha! Ha! Honest, direct and funny! Glad to find an author so unpretentious!

[writ rajat]

thanxxx you can we become friends

[Rachelle]

done! thanks for lightening up what would have been a heavy day!

[writ rajat]

thanxxx you for you help

[mendedwords]

I really like this piece, strong words.

[writ rajat]

thanxx vry much

[Gedalya]

Good way of easing the mood.

[writ rajat]

thanks you very much

[Lydia Shutter]

Cute word play here...and actually the font is purple! :) Lydi**

[writ rajat]

thanks you very much i am using black and white screen

[Pax]

haha, I can't help but smile wide, in your verse its fun to read...

It is not me who is writing,
it is my computer on which I am typing,

~ I have found that so ironic... :) most of us are here to write, we pen down out thoughts, but in reality we pen down our thoughts in a computer, typing... most of us are not traditional anymore. We become more reliant on it than a notebook and a pen. But sometimes i do write something on my journal notebook, i always have it under my bed...

a fun read my friend...

[writ rajat]

thanks you very much

[Ahena MK]

real fun read!!! read it quite a few times and laughed !! thanks for writing this ....
ahena :)

[writ rajat]

thanxx you very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very vmuch thats revierw is very good

[Ahena MK]

Welcome multiplied by 50 !!!

[Ahena MK]

Welcome multiplied by 50 !!!