Nepal earthquake

since i live in Nepal i would like to express my experiences

the quake of the earth was more than quake of the duck,

i am writing this poem because of my goodluck,

the earth started smmering down ,

i was in the night gown,

i dont know what to do i dont know where to go,

in the simposium of earth duck ,

 i was playing to and fro

Reviews

[Arundass TP]

An helpless condition.oh. no. Can't even imagine.

[Shweta]

Wonderfully written, euphemistically conveyed

[Perkele.7885]

It must have been a very harrowing experience for you and your loved ones. I am more concerned about you and your people than I am about your poem.

Your poem relates a little of what you were going through. I acknowledge this and consider it. "A"