Aloof

Here I stand weary and aloof,

Waiting for my beau.

Here I yearn for that smile anew,

That has withered away in dew.

Here my love cries for thine warmth,

Longing to be engulfed in the curve of your arms..!!

Reviews

[Sola]

Poetic, of course that I'm afraid is obvious. Interesting beginning, weary and aloof, and intriguing combination. I enjoyed the flow, the way you lace your words with just a touch of rhyme, well done.

[Kajal Gulabani]

Thanks you so much for such a motivating review ..

[Sola]

Not a problem.