to-day's dinner....

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

sharing the white bread

for to-day's dinner...

moon behind the coconut leaves!

 

...........Kaa.Na.Kalyanasundaram

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice vision create by beautiful words. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Jade]

Beautifully captured.

[外人 (Gaiji..]

Perfect choice of theme, great use of the little kigo, just cure a little more the metrica, seriously, that's the only thing missing for a PERFECT haiku !!

[Alpris]

Lovely visual here. Feels very romantic, like a moonlit dinner on an island beach or something. It puts me in a trance of ease :)

[Nidheesh Sankaran]

u r very fond of white breads... is it? U got one more point for ur lines... keep it up

[Ramya]

Fantastic. Fresh and creates this sweet imagery. Absolutely adore the last line!!

[Suditi]

Wow. Moon compared to bread.
A lovely poem, penned down with such elegance.

[Clockwork]

I feel like this could be a precursor to the poem with the boy and his bread making flashback. You show the power of the moon in its natural elements behind another natural fixture. Very organic and enlightening, my friend.

[AK]

Wow! Awesome poem! I loved the picture and the wordings! Keep writing!