Pain

The throbbing of one's heart

In its eternal darkness,

its everlasting shadows,

and galloping winds,

casts horror,

and fear,

in one's soul,

one's heart,

one's mind.

Silence surrounds you,

no light, no life, no breath.

It drives you to the edge,

of disaster,

of corruption,

and in the end,

it kills,

it takes,

it ends.

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Reviews

[MI-KOL HIGHLY]

Talk of talent.

Awesome write.

[She With Eyes Like Unsh..]

This poem was really well written! You are very talented!

[Mir]

You are really talented! I love the cut off-ness of this; how each line seems so defined. Great job! :)

[Gobinder Singh Dhindsa]

So beautiful.. Pen on.. Do u read mine 2 why and Time.
Regards,
Lucky

[SilentScreamingTears]

Although there are many aspects to pain, this describes a wide range of them very well. Great job on this.

[cfix]

I really enjoyed this one, I thought it was amazing!

[Sydney Rachel]

I just read this again and it gave me chills. And it's about 90 degrees in here.

[KatieDaray]

i like your style, very good

[Sydney Rachel]

This is possibly the most amazing poem I have ever read. It competely puts into words things that I have never been able to describe.