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“Curiouser and curiouser!”

Colors, shapes! They shine bright!
Oh, awake me father from this high delight
What is it?, What can it be?
Such a weird figure, it resembles me!

I fear one day
I fear it more than anyday
I fear that someday
It won’t just be enough

Lost from reality
Away in time
And you’ll ask yourself
Where is my mind?

Author's Note

Give me your thoughts and opinions. Also, if you see any grammar issue or misspell, let me know, help me improve my english!

Reviews

[emipoemi]

No grammar issues here! The "oh" in Line 3 can be removed (it's not necessary, and the musicality flows better without it). Other than that, this poem is a wonder to behold! It's curious, thought-provoking, and profound with a killer ending. Well done! Much enjoyed!

[kaoswithak]

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed! I sometimes use some references especially from songs.

[emipoemi]

using references is good on occasion, but careful of not ruining the musicality, which plays a key role in poetry.

[kaoswithak]

Never thought of it in that way, i usually see it more as a story. Nice point of view!