Can You Hear Me?

 

Can you hear me?….. No…. I mean can you REALLY hear me?….. cause your words are speaking loud to me….. the tone that you speak is on point…the way your words fluctuate and accentuate from your lips…. it makes me wanna kiss…the very soul of you…. to reap the whole of you….. and to justify my feelin’s….cause I’m able and willin’…to be a mass upon the masses…..within your folds of purification…..in my destination….in this bayou….of which you rest your hands….in this cup...from which you SIP….and you TASTE me….such a sweet, spiritual taste…..distinctive enough to captivate your mind…..strong enough to curl your toes…..CAN YOU STILL HEAR ME?

Reviews

[Yaooooooo]

Overall a good read, keep up the good work and feel free to send me a request when ever..
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[Steve Thompson]

I found your piece a very interesting read. I love the idea of the poem, it puts the reader in a new mindset.

[N. James Frazier]

i like how you know the difference between listening and hearing. But overall the structure, is unique and refreshing. Best of luck with all your future writing. By the way is the end of this piece a refrence to sex and orgasims?