Dragon of My Dreams

Just like the mythology of dragons...wisdom, fierce, flying, breathing fire...

You are the dragon of my dreams

breathing sacred air into my faded flame.

As time and space shift, a translucent

phoenix climbs from the shadow.

Are you the ancient mariner who has

mapped my endless deep sea?

I am a tempest until you embrace me

ebbing and waning no more.

You are the dragon who swims

beneath the wicked facade

hunting me like a champion of fate.

Dragon picture from 

http://dragononline.info/dragon-lords.html

Reviews

[Cree Nations]

Great write. Love the photo you attached.

I too love the Dragon lore,myth, and legend.

[Revolutionary]

I expected something dif when I read the title.This is still a well worded fear of the men who presue us sometimes.I have been in a 16 yr relationship but I watch the dating rituals of my friends.This poem reminded me of them.Scared of the right dragon in love with the wrong one.Taken by the stongest.

[Coyote Poetry]

Each line could stand on it own. I like the use of the sea and the dragon to make your point. I like the strong ending. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[khalid]

very wonderful. i liked the imagery way you used the dragon as a symbol of flame. i liked the picking of vocabulary items which really present the objectives. i liked the methods and techniques you used...very nice to read

[Alex Crow]

Wonderful work! Dragons are amazing

[EternityWolf101]

Dragons are amazing! Well done.

[Heather Clayton]

I loved this, of course, I also love dragons, but well done.