forever eternity

acrostic

Home to you from work I rush

Undoing a stressful day, into your arms I bust

Slowly exhaling onto you, the day I've been through

Beautiful is the moment, standing there with you

Appreciating the simple things for me you do

No ending to our life of journeys together

Destined for eternity forever

Author's Note

For my hub-cap, who roll's along with me, no matter what ! <3

Reviews

[from the desk of]

I love acrostic poetry and I love this, it is so nice to see happiness in the lives of others and there is nothing so peaceful as to have one to turn to when the days are long and overwhelming who will listen or not or just do what it is you need kudos to you and your hub-cap as you so fondly say, thanks for sharing this little write.

[karmax]

Thank yo from the desk of.....Always nice to have that certain someone to share life's little setbacks with...even if it is an exhausting day :)

[karmax]

Kymee...lol thank you for reading and yes exhausted I am! :)

[kymee]

Sounds like you are exhausted as you write this poem. Eternity is the goal. Good Work

[karmax]

Thank you Cheryl for you kind and beautiful wishes! :)

[karmax]

hris my fellow Ap member!! :) Thank you for commenting and reading. In these days, I wonder if marriages still have what it takes, frustrating, aggravating, but if we can say what we feel, i believe there is a true chance of lasting :)

[Poet Cheryl]

What a beautiful tribute to your husband. Your love and happiness are so very evident in this wonderful little piece of your beautiful relationship. The forever kind of love is hard to find but well worth the search and the wait. Best wishes for a future full of the same.

[chrisdavid]

This is a great piece that shows your love together is lasting the test of time. You describe the feelings, emotions and all that is good about a loving relationship. From the title downwards, this is terrific! I wish you both eternal happiness!! And yes! I'm from AP!!
Take care, Chris

[karmax]

Ah David...Thank you! This place wouldn't be complete with out your touch :) peace, love and poetry my friend! Glad your here...and my god writing can engulf us!

[karmax]

Coyote, Thank you :0 Sometimes it's the smaller things in life that mean the biggest! Thus being appreciated and one of them !