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This is a response to my friends poem. Hi the truth.

What’s worst then my lies

Is seeing her with you

Seeing her through your eyes

And all that you do

 

Me watching her cry

While you wipe her tears

Watching her walk by

And you still there

 

I always felt us fading away

You stepping in

Every single day

Now admit that you win

 

I hope that you treat her with grace

Her feeling have already been abused

But don’t thing I’m being replaced

So don’t confuse a solution with someone being used

 

Reviews

[Free Writer]

Wow this is spectacular! I could feel the pain that the narrator was talking about and it reminds me of a character one of my books that I'm writing. Great Job! :)