Grave yard

Haiku poem

Like a graveyard so densed,
And a tomb so deserted,
My heart feels empty

Reviews

[M.A.Rathore]

Haiku~5-7-5

high deserted tomb
erected in the graveyard-
heart-filled emotions

-M.A.Rathore

[AprilRN1210]

not sure of the exact rules of a "haiku".. not sure if this really qualifies, but the empty, painful, darkness came through.. (just my opinion but would change "densed" to "dense" and delete the "and" in the second line.. ) overall, nice job..