FIRE

A Poem by Kim

A burning deep down inside

Feels awful

Feels sick

Can't eat can't drink

Can't even think

The fire is so hot

Water wont even put it out

Can someone help

Can someone see

How deep the pain

Shouts out to me

© 2008 Kim

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Jessica

Short and sweet. A perfect description of that feeling. I have tried to describe it many times, but nothing has come close to what you have managed to ink here. Amazing.

Posted 18 Years Ago

Captain Blackheart (The..

This to me feels like your describing the feeling people get when your nervouse or afraid ect in the pit of your stomach. A great write!

Posted 18 Years Ago

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Added on March 5, 2008
Last Updated on March 8, 2008

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Kim

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I like to escape into the world of my mind which then allows the scribblings of reflection to flow. I write what I feel and what comes to mind. Some are silly, some are dark, some are good and som.. more..