Dawn till Dusk

Dewy lawns as morning awakens
Swans and cygnets
are on the lakes
while
clear is the swallows song.

Drakes and hens are near embankments
in their-nests
being greeted
by their morning guests
and occasionally little pests.

Bees and birds are nigh
Singing a buzz
as they’re-passing by
Some are mightier than the fly.

Woodland is being fanned by
The blowing breezes
Spring-time burrowers wild
Little off-springs
will settle them to be mild.

Later comes
the enchanting
evening sky
owls and bats come out to play
as the blank day has flown away.

Reviews

[Davey Payne]

Love this - great flow and style. You can really picture it

[Katrina Mckeown]

Thank you for visiting and for your kind review.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I get a bit of a mix here between Frost and Tennyson....
this is quite good, my friend.
j.

[Katrina Mckeown]

Thank-you j, I’ve heard of Tennyson but not Frost.. interesting..I’ll need to look them up! Have a great day .

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Robert Frost, pretty popular poet, lots of nature stuff, metaphorically.
i like your ending but have one suggestion for flow and concreteness..."as the "blank" day has flown away....would add an adjective before day...
it's a little bit abrupt as is.
j.

[Katrina Mckeown]

Thank-you j for your insightful review .. I will add something :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"tranquil" ?
absolutely perfect!

[NotUsinganymore]

I really love the description of the poem and it flows well. It makes me imagine the pretty scenery. I will definitely remember this scene whenever I'm sad or stressed.

[Katrina Mckeown]

JungLee.. thank-you for you wonderful review, glad you enjoyed my writing.

[Katrina Mckeown]

Hope you have a great day JungLee kind regards Katrina. :)