Final Piece

If the mess of me 

no longer existed,

and the clothes on my floor

were in place,

if my mind weren't scattered,

and my thoughts made sense,

would that bring a smile to your face?

If i ate a little better,

if I minded what I wore,

if I put on a little makeup,

would you love me a little more?

I'm beginning to ask these questions

if I did what you all ask,

would I still be Katie,

or just another girl in a mask?

And if I weren't myself,

would anybody care?

Would anybody miss me?

Would you know I was't there?

Does anybody love me?

No on likes me for me,

they see me as a rough draft,

but I'm the final piece.

Reviews

[Jamestown]

Fantastic write! You and many others are feeling this way, I could feel
the emotions shine through in this piece! Hang in there, there are lots
of people who love you and most importantly God loves you,thanks
for sharing and b-blessed!

[Katie]

thank you very much, I appreciate it :)

[Jamestown]

Your welcome, keep writing your talented!
I have some fun pieces you may enjoy, keep your head up and I♡HATERS
seem to be popular, lol b-blessed!