Brilliancy

You're beautiful, it's true.

Brilliancy 

 

Who knew that music

Could become blood, that

Silver primaries tarnish?

 

Who knew lost love

Never ages, that

Forbidden tears

are only

Forgotten smiles

 

Who knew

I could move on?

 

I counted blessings too late.

But at least I counted blessings.

Reviews

[justjenn_2u]

Who knew lost love
Never ages

My favorite line of the poem. Lost love keeps the same memory as when the love ends. The memory stays the same. A very imaginitive thought.

[Katie Foutz Voss]

"At least I counted blessings." I'm not sure what the premise of this is, but I enjoyed it thoroughly, and the last line was incredible. Nicely done.