Coming Home

Coming Home

 

late-night conversations—

kissing

in-between dreams

 

Reviews

[Teenage poet]

aww this is so sweet. Its short and simple and to the point. I like it a lot.

[Astrid Hamilton]

At first I thought this was a senryu, but I counted the syllables and it just is as it is,
without any rules- an Antigone of a poem, I guess-
I like it that it is on its own,
a perfect silent melody in music of the making of a sweet kiss such as this.
It makes me smile, in this dream.