Baby, The man i love

Truth about my love.

I feel bad for the things i once said
the things i at one time did
My heart burns like a brutal fire
Worse then the skinned knee on a kid.

You make me who i am
From the inside out
Without you i could never be
The girl you always talk about.

I feel like im a feather
in the weight of your arms
You suck in my whole world
Baby, your my lucky charm.

No one could ever take the place
Of the person that you are
Your love is too connected with me
either way, near or far.

I feel like a kindergardener
Laying next to your side
You bring out the child in me
I want to never end this ride.

Baby, your my everything
and much much more
Keep me close to your heart
And I will stay yours for sure.

Author's Note

This isnt my favorite poem..i think it could use bigger words?

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

Oh love you make me whole ..you make me who i am..in your arms i feel so light just hugging all that strength to me..your world just hug my world..with out you i have no life..with you i feel like a child you spoil me pamper me.and i just love the way we journey through life..i am nothing without you..you fill my world to ecstasy ..you give me endless love ..endless happiness..just wonderful..i really loved this